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Writing · Lesson 11 of 23

150 to 200 Words: Why the Range Is Not Advice

The range is not a suggestion and it is not a hard cut-off either. Length costs marks through what it does to completeness and clarity, which works in both directions.

What the rule actually says

Each CELPIP Writing task asks for roughly 150 to 200 words. The scoring rule attached to it is more subtle than most advice suggests: responses below 150 or above 200 words lose marks only when the length affects completeness, relevance or clarity.

So the count itself is not a penalty trigger. A 147-word response that answers all three bullets with specifics is in no trouble. A 205-word response with a tight argument and no repetition is in no trouble either.

What the range is really doing is describing the length at which a complete answer naturally lands. If your response is well outside it, that is nearly always a symptom of something the criteria do penalise, and the symptom is more useful to you than the number.

What being short actually means

A 130-word Task 1 email is almost never a complete email written economically. It is an email in which one bullet has a single clause and no specifics.

Test it yourself. Take a short response and point at the sentence that answers each bullet. Usually two bullets have a paragraph each and the third has half a sentence, typically the administrative one asking for dates, numbers or amounts.

That is why adding a closing paragraph is the wrong repair. Thank you once again for your time and I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience regarding this matter adds twenty-one words and answers nothing. The count improves and Task Fulfilment does not move.

The correct repair is to develop the thinnest bullet. I paid a considerable amount for the service becomes I paid $1,340 for the full-service package, quoted on 2 March under booking number MR-40821. That is fifteen words that fix the count and the coverage together.

On Task 2 the equivalent short-response symptom is reasons without mechanisms. Each reason is a claim and a restatement, with no which means anywhere. Adding the mechanism adds both the words and the marks.

What being long actually means

A 260-word response is rarely a response with too many good ideas. It is usually one of three things, and all three are penalised by criteria other than length.

The first is repetition. The same point arrives twice in different words, which costs under Vocabulary, where repetition is named directly, and under Content and Coherence, where a repeated idea reads as undeveloped rather than as two ideas.

The second is preamble. Forty words of I hope this email finds you well, my name is Daniel and I am a tenant in your building, and I am writing to you today concerning a matter before the first fact appears. Those words are not neutral filler; they delay the purpose sentence, which is where coherence is established.

The third is a third and fourth reason on Task 2. Two developed reasons outscore four listed ones, so the extra reasons are usually bought by shortening the two that were working.

There is also a plain time cost. Sixty extra words is about seven minutes of your twenty-seven, and those minutes come out of proofreading, which is where the Readability marks were.

The working target and how to hit it

Aim for 170 to 190 words. That band sits comfortably inside the range, leaves room for a sentence you did not plan, and does not require you to cut at the end.

The structural way to land there, on Task 1, is four paragraphs: purpose and context at about 40 words, then three bullet paragraphs at about 45 words each. That arithmetic gives 175 words and it allocates the words evenly across the bullets, which is exactly what coverage requires.

On Task 2 the shape is commitment at about 20 words, two reasons at about 65 words each, and a concession with a closing line at about 35. That is 185 words with two thirds of the response spent on development, where the marks are.

Practise until those paragraph lengths are familiar without counting. The word counter is on screen, but checking it repeatedly interrupts composition. Look once around the three-quarters mark and once at the end.

Quick tip

Aim for 170 to 190 words rather than the edges of the range. It leaves room for an unplanned sentence and removes any need to cut under time pressure.

Fixing the count in the last two minutes

If you are under 150, do not add a paragraph. Find the bullet with the least specific detail and add one sentence containing a number, a date or an outcome. One sentence is usually fifteen to twenty words, which is enough.

If you are over 210, do not delete your example and do not delete your concession. Both are carrying marks. Instead, look for three things: an opening sentence that says nothing before the purpose sentence, a sentence that repeats a point already made, and any sentence that could be moved anywhere in the response without breaking it.

A concrete cut. I hope this email finds you well. My name is Daniel Reyes and I am a tenant in your building. I am writing to you today because there is a problem in my apartment that I would like to bring to your attention. Forty-three words, replaced by I am writing to report a leak in my apartment, Unit 4B, that needs urgent attention. Sixteen words, and the email is now better as well as shorter.

If you are still over after those cuts, you are probably fine. Slightly over with no repetition is not what the rule penalises.

Counting in practice, not on the day

The habit worth building before the test is knowing what 180 words feels like in your own writing, so that you do not have to check.

Write five practice responses and count the words in each paragraph, not just the total. Most candidates discover that one paragraph is consistently double the others, and that paragraph is usually the one they find easiest to write rather than the one worth the most.

Then practise the two repairs deliberately. Take a 140-word answer and bring it to 175 by developing a bullet, not by adding a close. Take a 240-word answer and bring it to 185 by cutting preamble and repetition. Ten minutes of that is worth more than any amount of reading about length.

One last point. The counter shows words as you type, so the temptation is to write toward the number. Write toward the bullets instead. An answer that covers everything specifically lands in the range by itself, which is why the range is what it is.

Quick tip

If you are short, add a sentence containing a number, a date or an outcome to your thinnest bullet. Never add a second closing paragraph: it fixes the count and moves no criterion.

Practise it

Five judgements on length, and on what a wrong word count is really telling you.

1Your Task 1 email is 138 words. What is the best repair?
2Is a 205-word Task 2 response penalised?
3Which opening should be cut from an over-long email?
4Which paragraph split lands closest to a good Task 1 length?
5You are at 235 words with ninety seconds left. What should you cut first?